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Kneel before the all mighty Jasper! She looks soooo much better and look, I've improved within a day :D anybody else feeling proud? The tail is what took the longest. Should I name her tail? That'd be unique/weird right? Perfect. Exactly the way I am. Lemme get some constructive criticism from you lovely freaks of nature~ I tried something new, I don't have it outlined with pen.

:star:Creation time: About two hours:star:
:star:Traditional Art, coloured pencils:star:


Jasper (c) *Toast435
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Okay, I need to critique this because im just so proud of you toast really.

Vision: I gave you 4.5 stars because the way you drew her is so totally neat. Haha. Um first off I love the character design its cute and hot and sexy all at once. She comes off as strong bold and independent. I like her tail and the idea of giving it another name. c: And your scanner didnt ruin anycolors which is really awesomesauce.

Originality: I gave you FIVE SMACKIN STARS because your art is moving into its own little style now and I like it. I remember when I first watched you all you really drew was sonic characters, not that thats a bad thing buttt, this style suits you a lot more and is more appealing in my opinion.

Technique: I gave you four stars because I think you could work on shading a lot more. I really like the way her tail looks fluffy and her hair isnt just pin straigt. Shading is really difficult and I understand that because Im not too good at it. haha But practice makes perfect right? I can tell you've improved since I watched you and even over the past week I've been gone. Im super duper proud of how much improvement your showing annnnndd once again I really feel like your style is getting into place. The anatomy is great but a couple things, her neck looks a little too thin closest to the head, maybe just widen it a little bit. And also the position looks quite uncomfortablle but you drew it with amazing anatomy so if this bitch is uncomfortable than too bad right xD Haha, I would just work on making the pose maybe a little more comfortable. c:

Impact: I gave you five stars for impact because I think that overall this drawing is just FAPSPAM. I checked my notifications and looked for Toasty right away(i usually do c: ) anywhooo. I saw this and was like OH MY GOD I HAVE TO CRITIQUE THAT BECAUSE ITS SO AWESOME!
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~DragonTamerMCT Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
needs a filter imo, but thats all personal

but i like it ^-^ X3
















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*Toast435 Feb 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Glad you do~
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~Neamid Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist
This is a very nice picture with great colouring but I think it should have a mature content.
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*Toast435 Feb 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the input.
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~Neamid Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist
warning
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Mood: Love ~FrankandJoe3 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Interesting concept of a creature, and I like the mix of colors.
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*Toast435 Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you muchly.
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~Pure-Violence Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think its good but a background would make it better. Not even a real background just like a color shading maybe. Also placement of those spikes area bit off but It's overall dope
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*Toast435 Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the useful comment and adding the term dope.
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~Pure-Violence Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaaa youre very welcome cant wait to see some more stuff!!
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